Talk:Squall line

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Very nice job with the article DR! I only have one issue with it, the radar loop of the ET storm in 2008 is making the page very slow. Can you find a way to make it so that the image doesn't slow down the page? (this wont hold it back from passing GAN though). Since everything looks good, I'm passing the article. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 18:07, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

"derecho" in Spanish means "Right", not "straight". Otherwise helpful article.

Image of squall line

A reader supplied an image which may be useful for this page. File:Squall_line_Springfield_IL.jpg--SPhilbrick(Talk) 18:06, 4 March 2013 (UTC)

I noticed that part of the cloud is labeled "shell cloud" in that graphic. I think that is supposed to be "shelf" cloud. 65.35.103.170 (talk) 17:56, 13 March 2016 (UTC)

Text corrected. Pierre cb (talk) 22:48, 13 March 2016 (UTC)

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