Talk:Soviet submarine S-99/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 03:01, 8 January 2023 (UTC)Reply


Initial review

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I plan to review this article for GA class. Overall, it looks good. Djmaschek (talk) 03:01, 8 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

B class review

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This article meets all the criteria for B class. Djmaschek (talk) 21:15, 8 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Review 1

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@Sturmvogel 66: Referring to the following issues, please fix or argue your case for not fixing. Djmaschek (talk) 22:05, 8 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • Well-written, verifiable, broad coverage, neutral, stable, illustrated.   Done
  • Introduction: "Soviet Union" and "submarine" are each linked twice within the introduction paragraph.
  • Narrative-infobox contradiction: Submerged displacement is different (1,500 t vs. 1,215 t).
  • Description, paragraph 1: "Draft (ship)" is in the narrative. Omit the "(ship)" part.
  • Infobox, Complement & Surface speed: I cannot find the crew size (51) or surface speed (11 knots) in the narrative.
  • Construction and career, sentence 2: "Platonov says" (Source is Pavlov, not Platonov.)