Talk:Sorga Ka Toedjoe

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Crisco 1492 in topic GA Review
Featured articleSorga Ka Toedjoe is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
Main Page trophyThis article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on October 30, 2019.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 11, 2013Good article nomineeListed
May 29, 2013Peer reviewReviewed
July 23, 2013Featured article candidatePromoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on June 20, 2013.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Wong brothers' film Sorga Ka Toedjoe was the first in which Roekiah did not act alongside Rd. Mochtar?
Current status: Featured article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Sorga Ka Toedjoe/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Drmies (talk · contribs) 03:51, 11 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
  • Crisco, why'd you trim the second image? Drmies (talk) 03:54, 11 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Can you rephrase "extensively featured"? It sounds like K-pop writing. Moreover, the 30 October 1940 review praises the music and says it was supervised by Kartolo--the latter point is worthwhile mentioning in the lead since he has an article and was a songwriter as well. It notes that several other actors came from the "world of music"--I think that's enough for a sentence or two in the Production section. [Update: wait, you have that covered to some extent with "Roekiah, Kartolo, Landauw, and Titing were experienced kroncong singers." So nevermind, I suppose--"NVM"?] Drmies (talk)