Talk:Sir Bevil Grenville's Monument/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Miyagawa in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:54, 1 March 2015 (UTC)Reply


Ok, review time.

  • Lead: Swap around cites 3 and 2 so that they're in the correct numerical order.
  • History: As with the other article, move citations to after the following punctuation mark for cleanliness.
  • As before done where a cite only covers one fact in the sentence but moved now
  • Typo in the last sentence of the section: "rapairs" - "repairs"
  • "funded by Granvilles descendants" = "funded by Granville's descendants"?
  • "Battle of Lansdowne(1643)" - needs a space between Lansdowne and (1643)
  • Background - I'd move this section up above History, as it'll be the first thing to occur in the timeline.

Once you've dealt with those, I'll take another look. Miyagawa (talk) 20:33, 1 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Great, happy to promote this one too. Miyagawa (talk) 22:48, 1 March 2015 (UTC)Reply