Talk:Scott Harrison (charity founder)

POV and reliability

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Almost the entire article is based upon his own statements about events in his life. They are not third party sources. He's a reliable source for what he wants to say about himself and his opinions, but not for what actually took place. I also removed some promotionalism for his organization. DGG ( talk ) 19:02, 3 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

Proposed Edit

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The line about Scott's mother healing from her illness is out of date. In June 2018, Scott's mother passed away, which he wrote about in the below LinkedIn article. [1] Scott also set up a donation page on charity: water's website in honor of his mother when she passed, which I've linked to as well. [2]

For full disclosure, I work for a public relations firm that represents Scott Harrison and charity: water.

Ahackett302 (talk) 19:47, 16 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Proposed Edit: Career Section

The line about Scott "having sex with a girl of conscience" is inaccurate. That description is not included in the articles that are sourced. For more context on Scott's trip to Uruguay, the below articles in CNBC and Wall Street Journal include descriptions. [3] [4]

For full disclosure, I work for a public relations firm that represents Scott Harrison and charity: water.

Ahackett302 (talk) 20:13, 16 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ Harrison, Scott (June 19, 2018). "Goodbye, mom. I love you". LinkedIn. Retrieved 16 October 2018.
  2. ^ Harrison, Scott. "In honor of Joan Harrison's life". charitywater.org. Retrieved 16 October 2018.
  3. ^ Clifford, Cat (March 22, 2018). "How Charity: Water's founder went from hard-partying NYC club promoter to helping 8 million people around the world". CNBC. Retrieved 16 October 2018. Scott Harrison was 28 years old and partying in Uruguay when he had a fundamental, existential break. 'I had gone on a trip to Punta Del Este and realized on that trip, I had gotten most of the things I thought would make me happy and they hadn't,' Harrison tells CNBC Make It....In the midst of throwing house parties with hundreds of guests, Harrison made a promise to himself: He 'vowed to come back and change my life,' he says.
  4. ^ Wolfe, Alexandra (September 14, 2018). "Scott Harrison Turned From Nightclub Promoter to Philanthropist: Mr. Harrison left his club days behind to found Charity: Water, a clean-water nonprofit". Wall Street Journal. Retrieved 16 October 2018. The breaking point for Scott Harrison came at the end of 2003 while he was partying in the resort town of Punta del Este in Uruguay. A nightclub promoter at the time, Mr. Harrison was there with his model girlfriend, surrounded by fireworks and magnums of Dom Perignon. But looking out at his rented megayacht, he wondered why, at age 28, he was so unhappy....When he got home to New York, he sought to make changes.

Reply 16-OCT-2018

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   Unreferenced information omitted  

  • Additionally, sections of the article which were not germane to the BLP topic (such as the health status of the subject's family members) or else were discussing only the subject's opinions and/or motivations[a] were omitted.

Regards,  Spintendo  20:47, 16 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Notes

  1. ^ As other editor's have mentioned, the subject may be seen as a reliable source for statements about himself. Information which touches on other people would not be included (such as the subject's views on what effect water's unavailability has on people around the world, because those observations involve speculating upon—and judging—other's actions.) Stray observations, such as the subject's opinion of his own actions during his education, are questionable. If the subject had gone on to be an educator, observations such as this might be seen as relevant. The subject is an educator with regards to his own charity, but not in the traditional sense as mentioned in the scenarios of high school and college described by the subject.

Proposed Addition: Scott's book

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Scott's debut book Thirst: A Story of Redemption, Compassion and a Mission to Bring Clean Water to the World was published on October 2, 2018 by Currency, an imprint of The Crown Publishing Group under Penguin Random House. [1] [2]

The book debuted at #7 on the New York Times bestseller list for hardcover nonfiction. [3]

For full disclosure, I work for a public relations firm that represents Scott Harrison and charity: water.

Ahackett302 (talk) 21:27, 16 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ "Thirst A STORY OF REDEMPTION, COMPASSION, AND A MISSION TO BRING CLEAN WATER TO THE WORLD By SCOTT HARRISON". Penguin Random House. Retrieved 16 October 2018.
  2. ^ Thirst Book. charity: water https://www.charitywater.org/thirst. Retrieved 16 October 2018. {{cite web}}: Missing or empty |title= (help)
  3. ^ "Hardcover Nonfiction". The New York Times. October 21, 2018. Retrieved 16 October 2018.

Reply 16-OCT-2018

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   Edit request implemented    Spintendo  22:15, 16 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

non rs

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removing content sourced to self published blog and placing it here

He served aboard the Anastasis in West Africa, taking over 60,000 photos in 13 months.[1]

References

  1. ^ Scott Harrison's Mercy Blog, Posted December 1, 2005. Retrieved November 14, 2010.

Bangabandhu (talk) 14:33, 22 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Proposed Edit

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WRT:"While charity:water has claimed to spend 100% of its funding on programming costs, in 2017 Harrison received $325,278 from the organization." This wording implies to me as a reader that the organisation is somehow not keeping its word on how it spends its money. However, the reality appears to be more complicated. "On day one, we made a bold promise that 100% of public donations would always bring clean water to people in developing countries. To maintain that promise, we found a separate group (now, about 150 individuals and families from around the world) to fund our overhead costs. Since then, we’ve treated the two sides of our business differently — with separate purposes, separate fundraising goals, and separate bank accounts for water project funding and operations funding." [1] Therefore I feel the wiki page wording is casting aspersions and should be changed. I suggest that the model should be elaborated on so it is clear that 100% of donations received for water works are spent on water works. Whether the operations & water works split can be compared to other charities and how they operate should be Out of Scope of this article.

Roughana (talk) 06:47, 7 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

Proposed Edits to Scott Harrison's Wikipedia Page

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WP:PAID charity: water is my employer.

  • Specific text to be added or removed: In the first paragraph, please add "the New York Times bestselling book" in front of Thirst: A Story of Redemption, Compassion, and a Mission to Bring Clean Water to the World.[3] [1]
  • Reason for the change: Thirst is a New York Times bestselling book.
  • References supporting change: [2]
  • Specific text to be added or removed: Under Early Life and Career replace "Scott Harrison was born in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania and grew up in Hunterdon County, New Jersey.[4] Harrison began working as a nightclub and party promoter in Manhattan.[2] He spent the next 10 years organizing parties for the likes of MTV, VH1, Bacardi and Elle.[5] In August 2004, after a shooting at a nightclub he promoted in Uruguay,[6] Harrison quit his job and volunteered as a photojournalist for the Christian charity Mercy Ships, which operates a fleet of hospital ships offering free healthcare, being inspired by his father’s gift of A.W. Tozer’s book, “The Pursuit of God”.[7]"

with During his two years with Mercy Ships, Harrison was exposed to the conditions of the impoverished in Liberia, particularly those living without access to clean and safe drinking water. As a response, Harrison founded charity: water in 2006. The charity is a non profit organization that works to bring clean water to people in developing nations through its use of public donations, which directly fund water projects such as building wells and sanitation facilities.[8][9] As of 2020, the organization has raised $557 million [3] and funded 78,350 water projects in 29 countries which will serve more than 13 million people.[4] charity: water claims to spend 100% of its public funding on programming costs, with a separate bank account for operational costs that is funded by a group of wealthy donors. This claim is independently audited by KPMG annually. [5] In 2019, Harrison received $383,636 from the organization.[6]

  • Reason for the change: The previous information was outdated. We've updated with the most recent independently audited information.
  • References supporting change: See above.
    •   Not done Why is the Pre-2004 information being removed? How exactly is that "outdated"? Additionally, are there independent sources for the impact of charity: water (not from the organization's website? SpencerT•C 06:40, 23 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • Specific text to be added or removed: Add new section titled Thirst. Copy: In 2018, Harrison published Thirst: A Story of Redemption, Compassion, and a Mission to Bring Clean Water to the World. It went on to become a New York Times Bestseller. The book’s website claims that 100% of the author's net proceeds from the sale of Thirst will fund charity: water projects around the world.[7] [8]
  • Reason for the change: Thirst is a significant part of Harrison's story and should be included in his Wikipedia page.
  • References supporting change: See abov
  • Specific text to be added or removed: Under Guest Appearances, lowercase "charity: water" and add the following: He has also been featured by Armchair Expert with Dax Shepard [9], The Wall Street Journal [10], CNN[11], USA Today[12], Wired[13], Forbes[14], and Fast Company[15], among others.
  • Reason for the change: We've added Scott's most recent media coverage.
  • References supporting change: See above.
    •   Not done I have removed the Guest Appearances section as overall they are not notable, and then it leads to the inclusion of a messy list of various press appearances. If they are related to important career milestones, then that should be added to the section on Harrison's career and cited as a reference. The features in and of themselves are not notable. SpencerT•C 06:40, 23 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
  • Specific text to be added or removed: Under Personal Life, change the first sentence to: "Harrison is married to Viktoria Harrison, who led design and branding for charity: water until 2016."
  • Reason for the change: Viktoria Harrison left charity: water in 2016.

Andiriggs (talk) 19:17, 14 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

I will start responding to some of the requests above in-line for clarity. See my comments above. SpencerT•C 06:40, 23 January 2022 (UTC)Reply