Talk:Old Blockhouse/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
I'll take this one since I enjoyed the Cow Tower article so much...will add comments over the weekend. Zawed (talk) 08:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Comments as follows:
16th century
- I wonder if some context for Francis Flemming (and possibly John Killigrew and William Tyrell) is needed. Was Flemming a military engineer?
17th century
- Interregnum, Royalists and Robert Blake not linked in this section. All are linked in the lead.
- "Tresco became a base for Royalist privateers and Parliament became concerned that the Dutch": repeated use of "became".
18th-21st centuries
- link Duchy of Cornwall, Duke of Marlborough
Other stuff
- No duplicate links.
- Image tags look good.
- No dab links.
- External links work OK.
Pretty good work. Minor quibbles only. Zawed (talk) 02:46, 30 March 2014 (UTC)