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I'll take this one since I enjoyed the Cow Tower article so much...will add comments over the weekend. Zawed (talk) 08:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)Reply
Comments as follows:
16th century
I wonder if some context for Francis Flemming (and possibly John Killigrew and William Tyrell) is needed. Was Flemming a military engineer?
17th century
Interregnum, Royalists and Robert Blake not linked in this section. All are linked in the lead.
"Tresco became a base for Royalist privateers and Parliament became concerned that the Dutch": repeated use of "became".
18th-21st centuries
link Duchy of Cornwall, Duke of Marlborough
Other stuff
No duplicate links.
Image tags look good.
No dab links.
External links work OK.
Pretty good work. Minor quibbles only. Zawed (talk) 02:46, 30 March 2014 (UTC)Reply
Thanks Zawed! I'll make the changes on Thursday night. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:11, 31 March 2014 (UTC)Reply
Should be all done. I couldn't find any more on Tyrell, unfortunately. Thanks for the review! Hchc2009 (talk) 16:39, 3 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
Shame about Tyrell, but I think the context is better now for Flemming and Killigrew. Looks good, so am passing as GA. A pleasure to review. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 21:56, 4 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
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