Talk:Nightfreak and the Sons of Becker/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Wetrorave in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Wetrorave (talk · contribs) 15:09, 7 July 2021 (UTC)Reply


Following my reviews of 1977 (Ash album) and Avalanche United, it's likely fine for me to review this. Wetrorave (talk) 15:09, 7 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead edit

Background and recording edit

  • "were subsequently certified" > "were certified" because 'subsequently' is redundant
  • "A few weeks after" > "A month after" because the source says it was a month

Composition and lyrics edit

  • "album,[10][9] with" - put the refs in order
  • "and an organ heard" - remove the organ wikilink

Release edit

  • Looks good

Reception edit

  • Ref 26 is a page for reviews of Magic & Medicine, not of Nightfreak; here is the right link
  • "process. wrote" > "process. He wrote"
  • "or 'Pass It On'"," - replace the area in bold with Template:'"
  • "The staff at Tiny Mix Tapes"> "A guest writer of Tiny Mix Tapes"

Track listing edit

  • Good

Personnel edit

  • Move the sentence to the beginning of the section

Charts edit

  • Looks good

References edit

  • Copyright violation score initally seems bad at 30% but it is mostly because of the album's title and songs so it should be ok
  • Italicize the second "The Coral" on the title of refs 2 and 3
  • Italicize the title of the album on ref 15
  • Ref 17: "=BBC Music" > "BBC Music"
  • Add |author=Guest writer on ref 30

External links edit

  • Looks good

Overall edit

  On hold as of 7 July 2021:

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

You may oppose to any of the suggestions given here if you give a proper explanation. Wetrorave (talk) 15:09, 7 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

@Wetrorave: Made the changes. Yeepsi (talk) 15:31, 7 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Alright, I'll  Pass this one as well. Wetrorave (talk) 20:53, 7 July 2021 (UTC)Reply