Talk:My Little Love/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 02:53, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Hope all is well. Will start my review in the comings days. Pseud 14 (talk) 02:53, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you very much for taking up this review, Pseud 14. Excited for it.--NØ 17:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Will endeavor to tackle this soon (no later than end of week or weekend), just juggling some stuff IRL. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:52, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

In that case, please give preference to the IRL situation. Good luck with that!--NØ 17:55, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

I had a bit of time so I started with the lead and background section. Pseud 14 (talk) 19:56, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Lead

• They highlighted it as one of the most emotional songs on 30 and thought it marked an emotional progression for Adele -- suggestion on wording: They complimented it as one of the most emotional songs on 30 and what they deemed as an emotional progression for Adele.
• And maybe the follow-up critique could go like this: Critics also highlighted the inclusion of the voice notes, praise centering on the songwriting and lyricism.

Background

• These conversations inspired her return to the studio and the album took shape -- perhaps the second mention of conversations can be dropped as this is mentioned in the previous sentence. Could be directly stated as it inspired her etc, or something along those lines.
• Though Adele considered that her son would probably dislike "My Little Love" in the future, she thought it was an important song and decided to put it on the album: "He'll probably go through stages of hating it when he's a teenager -- maybe tweak the statement as "probably" is already used in the quotation, just so it doesn't become repetitive.
• worth linking digital download

Will get to the rest soon, and apologies if this review will come in segments. Pseud 14 (talk) 19:56, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Critical reception

• Ok

Commercial performance

• Ok

Credits

• Ok

Charts

• Ok

References

• Copyvio score at 39% but seems to be for use one of quote, which is acceptable.

Spotchecks

• Ref 3 - Ok
• Ref 15 - Ok
• Ref 25 - Ok
• Ref 45 - Ok

Image

• File:Adele for Vogue in 2021.png - appropriately licensed

That should conclude my review. Great work. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:02, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the review, Pseud 14. All comments have been actioned. I hope your week is going well!--NØ 19:36, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

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