Talk:Manny Get Your Gun/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GRAPPLE X 01:41, 4 April 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   Prose style is ok, but there are a few niggles though. " This episode of Modern Family was filmed on October 20, October 21, October 27, 2010" should just read "the episode", and include an "and". "The episode was originally titled "Dash, Flash, Crash" in original press release," should have an article attached to 'original' - "an original" or "the original", either works. I'd give it a combing through for things like that. MOS is grand.

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

   Citations are grand, no problem here.

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

   Scope is good, not too broad and not too narrow.

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   Neutrality seems fine.

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   History is stable.

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

   Sole image used is fine. However, article is missing a lead image. Can we get a screenshot of the episode, low-quality for fair use?

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Going to put this on hold until the prose has had a copy-edit (nothing major, just iron out the creases). I'd also like to see a lead image added. Neither alone is a huge problem but if they're both needing attention then I'd like to see one or both of them addressed before passing it.

I don't quite understand how to get a lead image, but other than that everything seems in orderNoD'ohnuts (talk) 04:50, 10 April 2011 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts

If you have the DVD, a low-quality screenshot (no bigger than 300px either dimension, so take one and shrink it down in MS Paint or Photoshop or whatever you use), is all that's needed. A prominent scene or the title card, etc. If you can't take one, that's okay, I'll pass it without one if it's difficult to get one. GRAPPLE X 17:46, 10 April 2011 (UTC)

I can't take one, I also don't have a dvd of this NoD'ohnuts (talk) 00:13, 13 April 2011 (UTC)

That's fine, not a huge loss. I'll pass the article without one then, since everything else was addressed. GRAPPLE X 00:16, 13 April 2011 (UTC)