Talk:Mamma Mia (30 Rock)/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by ThinkBlue in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:27, 20 June 2010 (UTC) Overall this is good, I just have a couple small issues:Reply

  • "When a child doesn't see his father enough he starts to jump up and down, then his mood level with drop until he pees himself." with drop? That doesn't sound right.
  • "Later, Liz and Pete sing the song "It Takes Two" by hip-hop duo Rob Base and DJ E-Z Rock to see if Tracy is familiar with the song as they have doubts about the age Tracy claims to be." You mean Donald rather than Tracy?
    • No, Liz and Pete at one point do believe that Tracy might be old than he claims, so they sing that song to see if he'll sing along to it, but he doesn't.

I'll put it on hold, etc. You know the drill :) Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:27, 20 June 2010 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, hope I addressed your concerns. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:20, 20 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
Alright, looks good now, I figured out the Donald/Tracy age thing above, so the article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:31, 21 June 2010 (UTC)Reply
Thank you so much. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:39, 21 June 2010 (UTC)Reply