Talk:Mamma Mia (30 Rock)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:27, 20 June 2010 (UTC) Overall this is good, I just have a couple small issues:

• "When a child doesn't see his father enough he starts to jump up and down, then his mood level with drop until he pees himself." with drop? That doesn't sound right.
  • Oops, "with" is supposed to be "will". Fixed. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:20, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
• "Later, Liz and Pete sing the song "It Takes Two" by hip-hop duo Rob Base and DJ E-Z Rock to see if Tracy is familiar with the song as they have doubts about the age Tracy claims to be." You mean Donald rather than Tracy?
  • No, Liz and Pete at one point do believe that Tracy might be old than he claims, so they sing that song to see if he'll sing along to it, but he doesn't.

I'll put it on hold, etc. You know the drill :) Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:27, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, hope I addressed your concerns. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 23:20, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

Alright, looks good now, I figured out the Donald/Tracy age thing above, so the article passes. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:31, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:39, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

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