Talk:Making the Bed/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: MaranoFan (talk · contribs) 11:01, 6 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: FishLoveHam (talk · contribs) 19:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this soon! FishLoveHam (talk) 19:06, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Prose

Incredibly strong prose, I only have a few comments.

Lead

• "personal flaws" → "flaws".

Background and release

• "&" → "and" (WP:&)
• "over a period of" → "over".
• Remove the comma after "album" (para 3).

Critical reception

• "about it" feels a little clunky, try rewording or remove.

References

• Why are some sources archived, yet others aren't?

Spot check

• [1] Y
• [6] Y
• [10] Y
• [15] a. Y b. Y
• [19] Y
• [24] Y
• [28] Y
• [33] a. Y b. Y
• [37] a. Y b. Y
• [42] Y
• [46] Y
• [51] Y
• [55] Y
• [60] Y
• [64] Y

Earwig's copyvio reported 32.4% in similarity

Overall, this should be a quick, easy pass, ping when you've addressed my comments! FishLoveHam (talk) 18:38, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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