Talk:Mahanati/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Ab207 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead edit
- Non-free use rationale looks good.
- Serial comma after Prakash Raj.
- Fixed.
- That's it here. Lead looks great.
- Thanks :).
Plot and cast edit
- 648 words – plot passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- "a year in coma" → "a year in a coma"
- Fixed.
- Cast looks good but I would use this template instead.
- Done.
Production edit
- "researching about the actress" → "researching the actress"
- "more of subconscious" → "more of a subconscious"
- "her take up the role" → "her to take up the role"
- Add a serial comma after "Chennai, Mysore".
- "vitange" might be a typo. Replace it with "vintage".
- Fixed all.
Themes and influences edit
- "interview to The Hindu" → "interview with The Hindu"
- Fixed.
- This section feels kinda short. I would try expanding it.
Music edit
- Make this a subsection in #Production – (WP:FILMMUSIC).
- Done.
- "called the album as Meyer's best work till date" → "called the album Meyer's best work to date"
- Fixed.
Release edit
- Add a serial comma after Rangasthalam.
- Fixed.
- "through a different perspective" → "from a different perspective"
- Fixed.
- #Marketing might need to be removed per WP:TRAILER.
Reception edit
- "Savitri's story as a" → "Savitri's story a"
- Fixed.
- "three stars out five" → "three stars out of five"
- Fixed.
- #Box_office usually goes above #Critical_reception.
- Done.
Legacy and accolades edit
- No issues in either of these sections.
References edit
- Sources are archived.
Progress edit
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