Talk:Mahanati

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Vaticidalprophet in topic Did you know nomination

Mistakes in Mahanati edit

-In the movie it was shown Savitri addressed S.V. Rangarao as "babai" (uncle) but in reality she addressed him as bava.

-In the movie it was shown Gemini Ganesh and Savitri had a very good relationship but in reality after the initial years of their marriage they had a very turbulent relationship which led to her excessive drinking and depression. Gemini Ganesh is a well known womanizer. Other than Savitri and his first wife he is known to have affairs with two more women. Actress Rekha is a product of one of these relationships.

-Movie seems to completely ignore her close relationship with other cinema families. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 183.82.227.63 (talk) 22:38, 8 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Dubbed edit

@Kailash29792:@Ab207:Recently watched the Tamil version. The CBFC certificate states that the film is indeed dubbed.TamilMirchi (talk) 03:05, 8 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

TamilMirchi, then please revamp the article accordingly. Kailash29792 (talk) 03:20, 8 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

IPA edit

@Ab207 Do you think IPA would be useful? I think maɦaːnaʈi is the one. Not quite sure though H:IPA-TE. -- DaxServer (talk) 18:48, 31 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

DaxServer, yeah. I think that's correct. This version had IPA, though its removed by an IP w/o explanation. -- Ab207 (talk) 05:11, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Ab207 The edit Special:Diff/892425352 has removed the IPA. Do we need cites for IPAs as well? -- DaxServer (talk) 17:22, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
Ahh, you mentioned IP removed it w/o explanation. Didn't read the last part of the sentence 🙈 -- DaxServer (talk) 17:23, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
@DaxServer: Oh, okay. Citation is not needed because its a directly derived from the Telugu source text, ie, film's title. -- Ab207 (talk) 17:36, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mahanati/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead edit

  • Non-free use rationale looks good.
  • Serial comma after Prakash Raj.
    • Fixed.
  • That's it here. Lead looks great.  
    • Thanks :).

Plot and cast edit

  • 648 words – plot passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • "a year in coma" → "a year in a coma"
    • Fixed.
  • Cast looks good but I would use this template instead.
    • Done.

Production edit

  • "researching about the actress" → "researching the actress"
  • "more of subconscious" → "more of a subconscious"
  • "her take up the role" → "her to take up the role"
  • Add a serial comma after "Chennai, Mysore".
  • "vitange" might be a typo. Replace it with "vintage".
    • Fixed all.

Themes and influences edit

  • "interview to The Hindu" → "interview with The Hindu"
    • Fixed.
  • This section feels kinda short. I would try expanding it.
    • Yeah, I felt the same here. Expanded it a bit, please have a look. -- Ab207 (talk) 09:37, 9 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Music edit

  • Make this a subsection in #Production – (WP:FILMMUSIC).
    • Done.
  • "called the album as Meyer's best work till date" → "called the album Meyer's best work to date"
    • Fixed.

Release edit

  • Add a serial comma after Rangasthalam.
    • Fixed.
  • "through a different perspective" → "from a different perspective"
    • Fixed.
  • #Marketing might need to be removed per WP:TRAILER.
    • Removed mundane detailing, though I'd remove the section entirely if you insist. -- Ab207 (talk) 09:37, 9 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Reception edit

  • "Savitri's story as a" → "Savitri's story a"
    • Fixed.
  • "three stars out five" → "three stars out of five"
    • Fixed.
  • #Box_office usually goes above #Critical_reception.
    • Done.

Legacy and accolades edit

  • No issues in either of these sections.

References edit

  • Sources are archived.  

Progress edit

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 01:24, 13 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Comment: My third DYK nomination

Improved to Good Article status by Ab207 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:24, 9 June 2021 (UTC).Reply

  •   Became GA today (9 June). Long enough, with proper citations. No copyright violations seen. Hook 1 is mentioned inline with the reference in the article and is catchy, and I would prefer it over ALT 1. QPQ not required as it is the 3rd DYK of the author. No image. Seems good to go. Jupitus Smart 16:51, 9 June 2021 (UTC)Reply