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Semi-protected edit request on 11 August 2016
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Other passages in the book recounting interactions of a sexual nature, starting when she was seven years old, with her then one-year-old sister Grace also attracted significant controversy,[1] and prompted numerous think pieces about children's sexuality and personal boundaries.[2][3][4]
There need to be a section in her page that actually outlines her controversy sexually assaulting her 1 year old sister. This is only ONE line in her Wiki, yet she is making videos on youtube trying to denounce sexual assault.
These sources are very clear:
"Dunham writes that “curiosity got the best” of her and she opened her sister’s vagina"
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"She describes masturbating while in bed next to her younger sister Grace"
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Zionvinman (talk) 16:27, 11 August 2016 (UTC)
- I've redacted some of your comments (in compliance with WP:BLP) which in between the quotes ventured into labelling, speculation, and original research. They did not constitute a suggestion for improving the article. However your points have all been made before in better ways, littered throughout this page and its archives. I wish to mainly point out that this is a biography covering the whole of her life and career. There is a separate article for the book where this matter is discussed more fully. If you have a specific suggestion for improving the text of this article, or that one, please make it, but I advise you to keep it encyclopaedic and not add your own opinions. -- zzuuzz (talk) 18:19, 11 August 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ Alison Flood. "Lena Dunham apologises after critics accuse her of sexually molesting sister". The Guardian.
- ^ McDonald, Soraya Nadia (November 3, 2014). "Lena Dunham responds to sites accusing her of sexually abusing her sister". The Washington Post. Retrieved November 8, 2014.
- ^ Clark-Flory, Tracy. "Child therapists: Stop freaking out about Lena Dunham". Salon. No. November 4, 2014. Retrieved November 7, 2014.
- ^ Oldenburg, Ann (November 6, 2014). "Lena Dunham: Sexual abuse or sexual exploration?". USA Today. Retrieved February 13, 2015.
- ^ Flood, Alison. "Lena Dunham apologises after critics accuse her of sexually molesting sister". theguardian. Retrieved 11 August 2016.
- ^ Clark-Flory, Tracy. "Child therapists: Stop freaking out about Lena Dunham". Salon (November 4, 2014). Retrieved November 7, 2014. What took place, was not “mutual sexual play” or two children “exploring themselves,” or “curiosity.
Semi-protected edit request on 25 August 2016
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"In the book, Dunham writes about being sexually assaulted by an Oberlin College classmate, which resulted in controversy over the accuracy of her account[52][53] and a case of mistaken identity when a former Oberlin College student named Barry (the pseudonym used for Dunham's alleged attacker in her book) lawyered up to ensure people don’t associate him with the content."
Besides being a terrible run-on sentence, the above passage contains the phrase: "Lawyered up". This is an inaccurate colloquialism that has no place in an article based on fact.
108.162.140.207 (talk) 19:39, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. KGirlTrucker81 talk what I'm been doing 23:43, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
