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![]() | A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 18, 2013. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that John Triscari, the coach of the Australia women's national wheelchair basketball team at the 2012 Summer Paralympics, works at Rockingham Senior High School? | ||||||||||||
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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
I will have a look at this tomorrow. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 01:42, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
- Should the personal section be changed to "personal life" section?
- Do we know where he was born?
- No, damn it. I know where he lives, but not where he was born. I could just ask him, but that would be WP:OR. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
- "but lost to the Canada" is the the needed here?
- Deleted. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
- The "Coach of the Year" stuff - who gives this award, and why is it noteworthy?
- It is from the Western Australian Department of Sports and Recreation. While there are many awatfd for players, there are not so many coaches awards. Hawkeye7 (talk) 04:18, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
On hold. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:58, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
- OK, looks good. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 15:41, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
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GA concerns
editAfter reviewing the article, I am concerned that this no longer meets the GA criteria. My concerns are listed below:
- There is no information post-2013.
- The lede is too short and does not summarise the contents of the article.
Is anyone interested in fixing this up? If not, should it go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 20:46, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
- I have expanded the lead and updated it to 2024. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:55, 2 August 2024 (UTC)