Talk:Jim Hobbins
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:47, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
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edit- I archived the reference links.
- I'm not sure his exact GPA is relevant.
- Removed.
- In the infobox, I think games played is enough. Just my opinion tho.
- The first three lineman I can think of each have it (Jason Kelce, Jason Peters, Jackie Slater), so I think it should stay.
- You need to clarify his replacement contract was also with the Packers. It is assumed, but not clear.
- Clarified.
Although some projected him as a mid-to-late round pick
who? Scouts? Sportswriters?- The source just says that he was "told he was a potential mid-to-late round pick" - I just stated that he went unselected.
he was at the age of 34 the oldest player on the team
-->he was the oldest player on the team at the age of 34
- Changed.
they had their first child later that year
, "first" implies more than one. If that isn't know, then just say "they had a child later that year".- Changed.
- Ref spot check: #2, 5, 8, 12, 20, 21
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:37, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: Issues addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:28, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:52, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 15:11, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- ... that Jim Hobbins played two years of professional football, spaced apart by 11 years? Source: Green Bay Press-Gazette (p2)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dustin Wolf
- Comment: Note that I might not have much time to do QPQs until around November 3/4, hopefully that's alright.
Improved to Good Article status by BeanieFan11 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:04, 25 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jim Hobbins; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Article was recently expanded to GA, is long enough and within policy. The hook is interesting and short enough. BeanieFan11, please ping me when you have QPQ done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:54, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: QPQ done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:12, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- looks good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 13:55, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: QPQ done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:12, 8 November 2023 (UTC)