Talk:I Am the Walrus (American Dad!)/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Matthew R Dunn in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I shall be reviewing the article sometime later. -- Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
Sorry for taking a while, but I will start the review now. This is how the article fares against the GA criteria;
- Well written: Mostly fine, see notes below
- Factually accurate and verifiable: Fails at present, see notes below
- Broadness in coverage: Passed
- Neutral: Passed
- Stable: Passed
- Images: The one image is fine, right tags used, Passed
Comments
edit- Nine of the references are from the Internet Movie Database. I'm sorry, but in my experience, the IMDb is user-generated, hence not a reliable source. I recommend changing the sources to something more reliable.
- And YouTube, how is this reliable?
- In the recption section, I don't like the format of the reviews; all three started with "Reviewer-X from X-site gave the episode a positive review." Try to use a little more variety, like "Reviewer-X from X-site reacted positively.
I will place the article on hold for seven days. Good luck. -- Matthew RD 14:17, 6 April 2011 (UTC)