Talk:I Am the Walrus (American Dad!)
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:I Am the Walrus (American Dad!)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I shall be reviewing the article sometime later. -- Matthew RD 13:21, 3 April 2011 (UTC)
Sorry for taking a while, but I will start the review now. This is how the article fares against the GA criteria;
- Well written: Mostly fine, see notes below
- Factually accurate and verifiable: Fails at present, see notes below
- Broadness in coverage: Passed
- Neutral: Passed
- Stable: Passed
- Images: The one image is fine, right tags used, Passed
Comments
edit- Nine of the references are from the Internet Movie Database. I'm sorry, but in my experience, the IMDb is user-generated, hence not a reliable source. I recommend changing the sources to something more reliable.
- Also replaced the IMDb references with a ref to the episode itself, which contains opening and closing credits. 89119e (talk) 21:04, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
- And YouTube, how is this reliable?
- I chipped in and removed the YouTube sentence and its associated link. 89119e (talk) 20:51, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
- In the recption section, I don't like the format of the reviews; all three started with "Reviewer-X from X-site gave the episode a positive review." Try to use a little more variety, like "Reviewer-X from X-site reacted positively.
- Addressed. 89119e (talk) 05:56, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
I will place the article on hold for seven days. Good luck. -- Matthew RD 14:17, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for addressing the comments. I will now pass the article. Well done. Let's hope there would be more American Dad! articles to reach GA. -- Matthew RD 00:48, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
The "dancing" scene with the ottoman
editI believe this is a reference to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUa6pcMOLEM
It made the rounds on the internet a few years ago. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.253.185.238 (talk) 12:41, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
Jeff sees Roger?
editWhile at the dinner table, Jeff walks in eating a popsicle and Roger is at the table without a disguise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 95.17.35.35 (talk) 20:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)