Talk:Henry Daglish/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

Picking up this one. Review to follow. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:43, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

• Lead:

  "the sixth premier of Western Australia" Not sourced in the article.

  " chief clerk in the WA Police Department." You haven't defined this abbreviation

• Early life:

  Link foundry

  "an offer of £20" Consider using the {{inflation}} template

  "the WA public service" You haven't defined this abbreviation

• Premier of Western Australia
• Typo: "Councill" should be "Council"

  " the fourth youngest to this day" Suggest use of the {{As of}} template here

  "Governor" Link Governor of Western Australia

  "properties valued below £1,000" Consider using the {{inflation}} template

• "Companies and Mining legislation" Should this be capitalised?
  • Source says "Companies and Mining legislation", so I decided to put the whole phrase in lowercase.

@Hawkeye7: That should be all. Steelkamp (talk) 05:25, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Looks good. Passing.