Talk:Five Nights at Freddy's 3

Latest comment: 6 months ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

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Not a wiki person, but the lede state's it's a prequel and the Plot sections says it's 30 years after the original. Please sort that out.

The lede is wrong, as is whoever continues to list it as a prequel. The description on the Steam store and the in-game text explicitly state that it takes place AFTER the events of the first game. -- 136.181.195.25 (talk) 20:48, 3 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
There is no source that clearly and explictly states that it takes place after the first game. It only says that it takes places 30 years after the pizza place closed its doors. Therefore, that falls under WP:OR. If anyone can find a source that clearly and explicitly states that this takes place after the events of FNAF 1, then I'll change my mind. TheMeaningOfBlah (talk) 21:19, 3 March 2015 (UTC)Reply
Common sense? The pizza place is obviously still open in FNAF1, hence why they even have a night guard. If it's been 30 years since the pizza place was closed, to the point where the owners have to track down "leads" on finding materials from the restaurant, then it must happen after FNAF1. Regardless, I've changed the lede to list the game as "the third entry in the FNAF series" which does not imply its place in the timeline, only the fact that it is the series' third release, which cannot be disputed. This should suffice quite nicely. -- 136.181.195.25 (talk) 21:32, 3 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Are the endings relevant in the article? edit

Are they necessary? Even if they do not explicitly tell the reader how to obtain them, it still mentions them, which qualifies as a spoiler. They would be accepted on the game's wiki itself, but not a Wikipedia article; it is not in any way necessary to understand the plot of the game, and thus shouldn't be included. 2601:3:100:64B:7846:6A2E:65EF:27D0 (talk) 10:01, 7 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Possible plot rewrite edit

I have not played the games and I based this off non-RSes. Normally I wouldn't have bothered, but the current plot has a fair bit of OR anyway. Maybe some of this could be of use.

Five Nights at Freddy's and its prequel Five Nights at Freddy's 2 take place at the fictional Chuck E. Cheese parody restaurant Freddy Fazbear's Pizza, where the player tracks the free-roaming animatronic robots as its night watchman. Through newspaper articles, messages from their shift supervisor (the "Phone Guy",) and minigames the player learns that in the restaurant's past a serial killer (who may have been an employee) murdered several children on its premises. The implication is that the animatronics, who are ostensibly trying to kill the player because of faulty programming, are in fact possessed by the vengeful spirits of the dead children.
Five Nights at Freddy's 3 takes place 30 years after the first game, with the player as a night watchman for Fazbear's Fright, an upcoming horror-themed attraction based on the shuttered restaurant. While plenty of Fazbear paraphernalia has been recovered for the show, it is not until the second night that the managers discover a complete animatronic, Springtrap, who they introduce as an exhibit. The player is also given training tapes from Phone Guy explaining that Springtrap is a special animatronic who's exterior "suit" can be converted to be worn by a robotic endoskeleton or a person. The spring-lock mechanism holding back the suit's robotic parts is extremely sensitive, however, and when someone is killed when these parts accidentally deploy into their body the suits are sealed away in secret storage rooms and disavowed.
After completing nights, the player enters minigames where they play as the old animatronics. They are lured to a remote room by the Purple Man, a figure used in FNaF2 's minigames to represent the killer, then violently dismantled. After the fifth night the Purple Man is confronted by the spirits of the dead children, and is killed when he tries hiding in the Springtrap suit.
Normally upon completing night five and its minigame the player will be informed they have reached the "bad ending." To get the good ending the player must find additional secret minigames, then find secret exits in each one to deliver cake to the murdered children's spirits. Thus comforted, they depart the animatronics, and after the final Purple Man minigame they player is informed they've reached "the end." Upon completing the sixth "Nightmare" level the player is shown a newspaper article stating Fazbear's Fright, and most of the paraphernalia within, was destroyed in an electrical fire.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Lenin and McCarthy (talkcontribs) 03:42, March 8, 2015‎

Also, lore-source wise, is this any good? --Lenin and McCarthy | (Complain here) 01:09, 9 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Also, the company does not refer to Springtrap as Springtrap. The company doesn't refer to it at all, except for on the second night. Springtrap is the name that came from it being a trap composed of springs for the Purple Guy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Phierywhovian (talkcontribs) 05:12, 26 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

Vandal Warning! edit

I have noticed vandalism recently. It is horrible. Five Nights fans have been doing it. They put"Animatronic Hallucanation" because of the story. It is not for FNAF fans.

Technically, that is not vandalism. It is describing the form the hallucination takes on, in this case, an animatronic. I have now changed the text to animatronic-like, so as not to confuse them with actual animatronics. Empoleonmaster23 (talk) 14:33, 13 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Five Nights at Freddy's 3/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:54, 28 October 2023 (UTC)Reply


I remember these being in vogue while I was at college! ♦ jaguar 13:54, 28 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Lead
  • " in a horror-themed attraction based on the chain of restaurants" - condense to restaurant chains
    • Done, though I made it just "chain".
  • "the player must monitor the attractions security cameras" - missing apostrophe?
    • Looks like someone else did this.
  • "A third entry in the Five Nights at Freddy's series was first confirmed in January 2015" - perhaps revealed is a better word choice
    • Done.
  • "with praise towards the reworked mechanics and gameplay from previous entries" - redundant phrasing
    • Fixed.
  • "The fourth game in the series, Five Nights at Freddy's 4," - replace with Its successor
    • Done.
  • "alongside the first, second, and fourth game's in the series." - incorrect apostrophe, regardless I would consider replacing this with instalments
    • Done.
Body
  • "... at a soon-to-open horror attraction" - link Haunted attraction (simulated)
    • Done.
  • "the player will be jumpscared and one of the systems will fail" - link jump scare for those unfortunate enough not to have fallen prey
    • Done.
  • "an opinion concurred Rowen and Vogel" - missing word
    • Fixed.
  • "The game's narrative and minigame's were also discussed" - discussed is a weak word; consider Critics were divided over the game's narrative and minigames
    • Done.

Overall this is a decent, compact article with not much standing in its way. I'll leave it on hold for now.  jaguar 14:05, 28 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi, thanks for reviewing both this and Hotline Miami 2. I believe I have addressed all of the above concerns. NegativeMP1 15:11, 28 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
No problem, I'm happy to promote this.  jaguar 18:23, 28 October 2023 (UTC)Reply