Talk:Female gangs in the United States

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Valetude in topic Suggestions to Improve Article

Suggestions to Improve Article

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Overall this seems to be a good start to the article. There are some grammatical improvements that could be made, along with those for readability such as greater internal structuring of the subsections. Topic sentences and transitions would also help. The subtopics themselves, however certainly add to the comprehensiveness of the article as a whole and can be improved with more edits and the help of other Wikipedians!Katcai02 (talk) 22:42, 5 November 2014 (UTC)Reply


I think this is a great beginning for this article. It is very clear, and outlines interesting and relevant issues to the topic of female gangs in the US. This article would benefit greatly from expanding the sections on History and Types of involvement. As the article grows, use of subtopics could also be useful. LHall19 (talk) 02:30, 6 November 2014 (UTC)Reply

Something must have changed since this comment was made. The current first sentence starts: In her book on females in gang culture, Taylor claims... Er... Who? Valetude (talk) 21:03, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Excellent work on Female Gangs in the United States. Looking forward to further contributions from you! . DStrassmann (talk) 04:10, 26 December 2014 (UTC)Reply