Talk:Fall from the Sky (song)/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by MarioSoulTruthFan in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 17:43, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
Infobox edit
- Studio: Revolver Recordings, Westlake Village, U.S. → not mentioned on the body of the article, no source for it
- Genre: Pop → not mentioned on the body of the article, despite source calling it a pop ballad
Lead edit
- Here you need to reference the original song and how she changed the version.
- You don't need the three references here, just leave them on the body of the article, we avoid the lead to have sources.
- The same for the COVID-19 situation
- Mention the lyric video
- When it was released, formats and label
Background edit
- Fine
Composition edit
- TuneBat is not a reliable soruce.
- "Lyrically, it express Arilena's hopeless desire to overcome deep and perplexing emotions that didn't want to fade away. Lyrics of the song include, "[...] Always making me hold back my wings, When I'm destined to fly/ I'm screaming inside". → source
- Retitle "Background and compostion"
Promotion edit
- Five sources makes the text very cluncky. You need to put them under the same one.
- and to streaming services → and streaming services
- One day after, on 10 March 2020 → On the following day,
- onto the → on the
- around 10:00 (CET) → excessive detail
Critical reception edit
- Remove the professional ratings box
- Add the rating to the critical reception
- Eurovision.de writer Irving Wolther → Eurovision.de writer, Irving Wolther,
- BBC → BBC
- In a review for "Fall from the Sky" → I already know that, it was the only song he reviewed on the article, remove
- You need to fix the "culturefix" source, doesn't open and I need to see it
- The website works? :/--Lorik17 (talk) 18:53, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- I archived it. It just kept loading for me. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:06, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- Ok, great! :) Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:21, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- Who is the editor from culture fix? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:18, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Ok, great! :) Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:21, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- I archived it. It just kept loading for me. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:06, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
Festivali i Këngës edit
- while out of all submissions → what do you mean?
- [25][1] → [1][25]
Rotterdam edit
- On 28 January, → year?
Personnel edit
- Use
{{spaced ndash}}
so there is the right space between credits and personnel.
Track listing edit
- Fine
Release history edit
- This is a mess, you switch everything
- Independent → don't wikilink
References edit
- music.apple.com → Itunes and is publisher
- eurovision.tv → European Broadcasting Union and is publisher
- wiwibloggs.com. → Wiwibloggs ans is publisher
- Tidal is publisher
- youtube.com → Youtube and is publisher
- rtsh.al → Radio Televizioni Shqiptar and is publisher
- festivali.rtsh.al → same as preivous
- Archive all wikilinks they seem unstable
- culturefix.co.uk → Culturefix, publisher?
- Don't SHOUT on the sources
- bbc.com. → BBC and is publisher
- eurovoix.com → Eurovoix and is publisher
- eurovision.de → ARD (broadcaster) and is publisher
- telegrafi → if these are not magazines/newspapers then they are publisher, ok?
- Two options here either wikilin everything or wikilink only once each work/publisher once it appears (first instance)
Overall edit
- You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:43, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Iaof2017: Hopefully, you didn't forget that are some things issues to fix. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:47, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: I tried to fix the last issues and I hope its good now.--Lorik17 (talk) 12:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Iaof2017: Hopefully, you didn't forget that are some things issues to fix. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:47, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
@Iaof2017: The culturefix source is still in all caps, missing the name of its editor in the text. Some sources such as metro.co.uk need to change to metro as work, and there are others that have their website instead of pubisher or work. In the meantime I will fix other stuff. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: There is no name of any editor in the culturefix article.--Lorik17 (talk) 12:05, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- You missed "eurovision-spain.com". If fix culturefix for you. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:30, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: I fixed it.
- You missed "eurovision-spain.com". If fix culturefix for you. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:30, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: There is no name of any editor in the culturefix article.--Lorik17 (talk) 12:05, 13 April 2020 (UTC)