Talk:Fall from the Sky (song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 17:43, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Studio: Revolver Recordings, Westlake Village, U.S. → not mentioned on the body of the article, no source for it

I removed it.  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:49, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Genre: Pop → not mentioned on the body of the article, despite source calling it a pop ballad

I removed it.  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:49, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Here you need to reference the original song and how she changed the version.

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 12:31, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• You don't need the three references here, just leave them on the body of the article, we avoid the lead to have sources.

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• The same for the COVID-19 situation

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Mention the lyric video

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• When it was released, formats and label

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:23, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Background

• Fine

Composition

• TuneBat is not a reliable soruce.

I removed the section.  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:49, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• "Lyrically, it express Arilena's hopeless desire to overcome deep and perplexing emotions that didn't want to fade away. Lyrics of the song include, "[...] Always making me hold back my wings, When I'm destined to fly/ I'm screaming inside". → source

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 21:27, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Retitle "Background and compostion"

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:46, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Promotion

• Five sources makes the text very cluncky. You need to put them under the same one.

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 12:14, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• and to streaming services → and streaming services

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• One day after, on 10 March 2020 → On the following day,

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• onto the → on the

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• around 10:00 (CET) → excessive detail

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

• Remove the professional ratings box

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Add the rating to the critical reception

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 12:39, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• Eurovision.de writer Irving Wolther → Eurovision.de writer, Irving Wolther,

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:49, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• BBC → BBC

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• In a review for "Fall from the Sky" → I already know that, it was the only song he reviewed on the article, remove

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• You need to fix the "culturefix" source, doesn't open and I need to see it

The website works? :/--Lorik17 (talk) 18:53, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

I archived it. It just kept loading for me. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:06, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Ok, great! :)  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:21, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Who is the editor from culture fix? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:18, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Festivali i Këngës

• while out of all submissions → what do you mean?

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• [25][1] → [1][25]

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Rotterdam

• On 28 January, → year?

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Personnel

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel.

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

• Fine

Release history

• This is a mess, you switch everything

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Independent → don't wikilink

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 18:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

References

• music.apple.com → Itunes and is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:19, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• eurovision.tv → European Broadcasting Union and is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• wiwibloggs.com. → Wiwibloggs ans is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Tidal is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• youtube.com → Youtube and is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:19, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• rtsh.al → Radio Televizioni Shqiptar and is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• festivali.rtsh.al → same as preivous

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:19, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Archive all wikilinks they seem unstable

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• culturefix.co.uk → Culturefix, publisher?

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 12:15, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

• Don't SHOUT on the sources
• bbc.com. → BBC and is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• eurovoix.com → Eurovoix and is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:19, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• eurovision.de → ARD (broadcaster) and is publisher

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• telegrafi → if these are not magazines/newspapers then they are publisher, ok?

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 19:42, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

• Two options here either wikilin everything or wikilink only once each work/publisher once it appears (first instance)

 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 20:19, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall

• You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:43, 8 April 2020 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: Hopefully, you didn't forget that are some things issues to fix. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:47, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I tried to fix the last issues and I hope its good now.--Lorik17 (talk) 12:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: The culturefix source is still in all caps, missing the name of its editor in the text. Some sources such as metro.co.uk need to change to metro as work, and there are others that have their website instead of pubisher or work. In the meantime I will fix other stuff. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: There is no name of any editor in the culturefix article.--Lorik17 (talk) 12:05, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

You missed "eurovision-spain.com". If fix culturefix for you. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:30, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I fixed it.