Talk:Dilek Peninsula-Büyük Menderes Delta National Park/GA2

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Will211 (talk · contribs) 04:19, 15 March 2016 (UTC)Reply


Comment edit

This review is probably going to be quick, as all of the problems I had in the first GA Review have been fixed. I may however, find other issues, which I will post below.

It is well written edit

the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct  

and it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.  


I fixed some grammar errors that I found, but everything looks good now.

Verifiable with no original research edit

it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline  

all in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines  

it contains no original research  

it contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism  


This is the only area in which I can find any problems. Using checklinks, I found two sources that have issues. For reference 17, the website cannot be reached, and reference 30 comes up with a 404 error. Any information that is in the article and relies on these two sources would have to be referenced with different websites.

Neutral edit

it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each  

Stable edit

it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute  

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate edit

images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content  

images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions  


Nice job with fixing the descriptions, everything looks good now!

Overall edit

The sources problem is the only thing that needs to be fixed. When these issues are fixed, the article can be passed   Will211 (talk) 06:30, 15 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Alright, I see that the references have been fixed. With the gallery, I think the topographic model would be good to put in the article, but that's your decision. Since the problems have been fixed, this article can pass. Will211 (talk) 00:50, 16 March 2016 (UTC)Reply