Talk:Dilek Peninsula-Büyük Menderes Delta National Park/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Will211 (talk · contribs) 05:05, 20 January 2016 (UTC)

It is well written

the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct

and it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.

For consistency change east-west in the first sentence under the geography section to east to west.

The Mycale Strait separates the peninsula from the nearby island of Samos. Named after Mount Mycale, it is only about 1.6 km (0.99 mi) long at its narrowest point, making it one of the smallest straits within the region of the Aegean Sea. Change the first it in the second sentence to the strait to be more specific.

As a result, these beaches tend to attract more experienced swimmers, and locals rather than tourists. Remove comma between swimmers and the word and.

In the Cave of Zeus section, clearly establish that the cave is located within the National Park.

In the Cave of Zeus section, split the sentence The entrance is dense in vegetation, covering parts of it, and there is also a wishing tree that people tie objects to in order to make a wish, in the hope that it will be granted. into two separate sentences, one about dense vegetation, one about the wishing tree.

Its highest mountain, Dilek Dağı, is approximately 1,237 metres (4,058 ft) AMSL high Change Dilek Dağı to Mount Mycale and remove AMSL.

Events could be moved to the history section, rather than the activity section.

Optional edit-In the first sentence under the history section: For most of the area's existence, the lands from the peninsula southwards to the river delta were uninhabited by people or very sparsely settled, and were otherwise untouched by human influence., be more specific as to what peninsula and river delta are being mentioned. This may seem a bit peculiar, but it would be better to have this information than not.

Verifiable with no original research

it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline

all in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines

it contains no original research

it contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism

Neutral

it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each

Stable

it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate

images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content

images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions

Be more specific as to what trail is being talked about in the caption An outlook from the trail OR change the caption to "An outlook from a trail"

A view of the trail with Mycale in the background Be more specific as to what trail is being talked about OR change the caption to: A view of the park with Mycale in the background.

A close view from the path Be more specific as to what the view is of. Also change the path to the name of the path OR change the path to a path.

Change the caption Mount Mycale to A view of Mount Mycale

For the caption A small cove along the shore be more specific as to what "the shore" is.

Overall

This article does not meet GA standards. However, with the fixes mentioned above, it could become a GA Article. After the fixes are made, leave a message on my talk page, and I would be more than happy to once again review this article to see if it meets GA Criteria.