Talk:Dadaglobe/Archive 1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Coldcreation in topic Query

Query

Why does this page keep getting kicked back to the "submitted one day ago" when the submission dates are listed as 18 and 19 January? I have continued to make minor edits, but I didn't think that this would change the submission date. Since an aspect of this entry is very timely (related exhibition to open shortly), I am anxious to get it reviewed and make any necessary edits. Any guidance on this matter would be very much appreciated. Gaw54 (talk) 16:49, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

There appears to be something missing from this paragraph:

Some of Dada's most iconic artworks were created in direct response to the Dadaglobe solicitation letter: Ernst's Chinese Nightengale, These works were conceived by the artists with their presentation in reproduction foremost in mind. Dadaglobe was to have been a manifesto on the revised status of the artwork in reproduction.

Also, it would be beneficial to the reader if images and quotes from the original unpublished document were added to the article. Coldcreation (talk) 21:54, 23 January 2016 (UTC)
I see the paragraph has been fixed. Nice. Not sure, however, what this is supposed to mean: "Dadaglobe was to have been a manifesto on the revised status of the artwork in reproduction." This sentence has no reference, so I could not directly seek out the meaning of "revised status of the artwork in reproduction". Perhaps this should be elaborated upon with a citation added for clarity. Coldcreation (talk) 11:41, 24 January 2016 (UTC)