Talk:Contraceptive trials in Puerto Rico

Comment by Rgoldfarbterry

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While I found this article to be very informative and relatively neutral, I think that there are some areas that could be approved upon. Most, if not all, of the sources are from the (mainland) US, such as Planned Parenthood or PBS. In addition to this, almost all of the information cited in the article comes from these two sources. Perhaps an interesting addition to this article would be sources that originate from Puerto Rico or Puerto Rican people, as the entry is about something that happened in Puerto Rico. Additionally, I might suggest that more contemporary sources be added, as most of those used are from 2012 or before. Overall, however, I think that the author did an excellent job at presenting the topic in a “neutral” way that also presented the controversies surrounding these trials in Puerto Rico.

Rgoldfarbterry (talk) 03:28, 9 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Section header added by Seagull123 Φ 17:46, 11 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

Bad language

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What does that mean?

As Kimberlé Williams Crenshaw would argue through the theory of intersectionality, ...

How can you argue through something? It is an example of such confused style here, hiding confusing claims. Zezen (talk) 11:11, 8 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

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Yeah that whole section was written like an essay. I cleaned it up but it may need further editing. Carlp941 (talk) 19:29, 10 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

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