Talk:Carl Au/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Soaper1234 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:34, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- Hello again. I should be able to respond in reasonably time. Soaper1234 - talk 22:32, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Due to some unforeseen computer issues, I've not been able to respond as quickly as I would have liked. However, I'll try to respond in the next couple of days. I also have a couple bits of information to add to the article, as well as the recommendations below. Soaper1234 - talk 22:46, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead edit
- Actual birthdate seems like a requirement for GA.
- Done some digging and found it. Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- Add commas after "dancer" and Ostrich Boys.
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- "began" → "begun"
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Early life edit
- "graduated
fromin 2008"- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Career edit
- Remove the comma after "Pet Shop Boys dancers".
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- "from May" → "in May"
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- "in new play" → "in the play"
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- "guest starred" → "guest-starred"
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Filmography edit
- Knowing each role also feels like a requirement.
- Is this in response to the Copperfield role? If so, it can be removed. Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Awards and nominations edit
- Since there's only one award I would remove the "Work" column, at least for now.
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
References edit
- Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).
- Done Soaper1234 - talk 12:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Progress edit
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