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The non-inline cited reference at the bottom could go in its own section... perhaps have a ==References==, and then a ===Works cited=== and ===Footnotes=== or something like that...
Split into ==Footnotes== and ==References==.
I suck at writing leads. Have you tried to improve it since I worked on it?
Seems pretty good to me...aren't you supposed to give me constructive criticism? :) Seriously, though, all I've changed is the sentence about critical commentary.
"When he writes lyrics, Veloso typically uses the word você, but sings cê" - might want to make it more clear that he writes você by says cê (am I right?)... it's a bit awkward for now
Smoothed out a bit, I think.
"However, the inspiration for the album's title came when the musician physically wrote cê instead" - The however seems out of place, and this is a bit awkward in general...
See above.
"from nearly every critic reviewing it" - you only cite... two reviews, so it's a bit weird to say this...