Talk:Bermuda at the 2010 Winter Olympics

Latest comment: 6 years ago by M00036 in topic GA Review
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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Bermuda at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: M00036 (talk · contribs) 17:33, 5 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

On hold "good article" nomination

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This article has failed its Good article nomination but is on hold to allow time to meet the criteria. This is how the article, as of May 5, 2018, compares against the six good article criteria:

1. Well written?:   Fail - It is generally well written but it is not particularly concise and has repetitions such as "and has appeared at every Winter Olympics since" when the Winter and Summer Olympics could be combined for this comment.
2. Verifiable?:   Pass - Well referenced and clear research.
3. Broad in coverage?:   Pass - Very thorough although be careful not to make parts irrelevant to the specific article (particularly in the background section). This article will struggle to be become a good article due to the limited opportunities to fulfil breadth in coverage while remaining pertinent to the article title.
4. Neutral point of view?:   Pass - Clearly neutral
5. Stable?:   Pass - Clearly stable
6. Images?:   Pass - Yes although additional media relating to the event in question would be more pertinent to the article.

  On Hold - Although it is close to meeting the criteria, there are issues with what content has been included and how. These articles tend to be difficult to become a good article, and an excellent effort has been made. To make this a "good article", I would advise rewording the background section, and try and better relate this to the page title. You might also want to consider looking for other media to better secure a pass in section 6.

When these issues are addressed, the article can be renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to have it reassessed. Thank you for your work so far.— M00036 (talk) 17:33, 5 May 2018 (UTC)Reply


  Following minor changes to the "Background" section in particular in the article, I have reassessed this page to fulfil the GA criteria. M00036 (talk) 20:04, 5 May 2018 (UTC)Reply