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Edit Request
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Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. [See below]
NOTE: I am proposing this edit for FleishmanHillard on behalf of Bass Pro Shops. I am a paid editor and am aware of the COI guidelines. I am submitting this edit request to propose revisions and additions to the article in hopes of making the article more accurate and complete. The edits are as follows in the box:
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Add, “In 2017, Cabela’s was acquired by Bass Pro Shops for $4 billion[1]” at the end of the upfront paragraph.
Revise the Revenue and Number of Employees sections in the infobox with updated numbers:
Rename the “Tracker Marine Group” section to White River Marine Group to reflect the company’s current name[4][5].
Add, “The company is now known as White River Marine Group” to the end of the “Tracker Marine Group” paragraph to clarify the name change.
Remove the standalone section on the NRA National Sporting Arms Museum, and add it after the first paragraph of the “Retail Stores” section along with other attractions. Recommend adding the following sentence after the first paragraph of the “Retail Stores” section: “The original Bass Pro Shops location in its hometown of Springfield, Mo., features many additional attractions including Wonders of Wildlife Museum & Aquarium, the National Archery Hall of Fame, NRA Sporting Arms Museum, John A. and Genny Morris Conservation Education Center, and the White River Conference Center.”[6]
Remove the standalone sections for “Islamorada Fish Company Restaurant” and “Uncle Buck’s Fishbowl and Grill,” and add them to the end of the “Retail Stores” section to keep the page more concise. Recommend the last sentence of the “Retail Stores” section reading: “Many Bass Pro Shops locations feature in-store dining, with concepts including Hemingway’s Blue Water Café, Islamorada Fish Company, White River Fish House and Uncle Buck’s Fishbowl and Grill.[7]”
Add a section called “Hospitality” under “Retail Stores” with the following copy: “Bass Pro Shops operates several hospitality resorts including Big Cedar Lodge in Ridgedale, Missouri; Big Cypress Lodge inside Bass Pro Shops at the Pyramid in downtown Memphis and Angler’s Lodge, across the street from its National Headquarters in Springfield, Missouri.[8]”
Add a section called “Conservation Efforts” under “Hospitality” with the following copy: “Bass Pro Shops partners with conservation organizations including Ducks Unlimited, National Wild Turkey Federation, Rocky Mountain Elk Foundation and the Quality Deer Management Association to advocate and advance conservation programs and initiatives.[9]
Thank you for your consideration! Alec Voss (talk) 16:01, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
Reply 11-JAN-2019
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request. Spintendo 17:09, 11 January 2019 (UTC)
Proposal review 11-JAN-2019
In 2017, Cabela’s was acquired by Bass Pro Shops for $4 billion[1] at the end of the upfront paragraph. Declined.[note 1]
Revenue: US$ 8 billion (2018) Number of Employees: 40,000 Approved.Cite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page).
Rename the “Tracker Marine Group” section to White River Marine Group to reflect the company’s current name Approved.[note 2]
The company is now known as White River Marine Group. Declined.[note 3]
The original Bass Pro Shops location in its hometown of Springfield, Mo., features many additional attractions including Wonders of Wildlife Museum & Aquarium, the National Archery Hall of Fame, NRA Sporting Arms Museum, John A. and Genny Morris Conservation Education Center, and the White River Conference Center. Many Bass Pro Shops locations feature in-store dining, with concepts including Hemingway’s Blue Water Café, Islamorada Fish Company, White River Fish House and Uncle Buck’s Fishbowl and Grill. Bass Pro Shops operates several hospitality resorts including Big Cedar Lodge in Ridgedale, Missouri; Big Cypress Lodge inside Bass Pro Shops at the Pyramid in downtown Memphis and Angler’s Lodge, across the street from its National Headquarters in Springfield, Missouri. Bass Pro Shops partners with conservation organizations including Ducks Unlimited, National Wild Turkey Federation, Rocky Mountain Elk Foundation and the Quality Deer Management Association to advocate and advance conservation programs and initiatives. Clarification needed.[note 4]
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^This article is about Bass Pro Shops, and to a lesser degree, its individual subsidiaries. This part of the edit request proposal was declined because specific information about Bass Pro Shop's individual subsidiaries is not germane to the lead section discussing Bass Pro Shops.
^Text was added to this section indicating the approximate date of the name change.
^This part of the edit request proposal was declined because the sentence uses the word now. SeeMOS:REALTIME.
^This part of the edit request proposal requires secondary sources. SeeWP:SECONDARY.
