Talk:Audrey Pauley

Latest comment: 11 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review
Good articleAudrey Pauley has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starAudrey Pauley is part of the The X-Files (season 9) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 22, 2012Good article nomineeListed
September 8, 2012Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Audrey Pauley/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:53, 20 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Issues edit

General edit

  • No dab links. Great work!
  • No dead links. Great work!
  • Non-free images have good rationales.

Infobox edit

  • Infobox Television episode should be "Infobox television episode" (extremely picky)
    • I'll change it, but does that legitimately change anything?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • Per MOS:PUNCT, "Consistent use of the straight (or typewriter) apostrophe ( ' ) is recommended, as opposed to the curly (or typographic) apostrophe ( ’ )." That being said, I see that Barreiro’s and Barreiro’s Daughter use that when they should use '

Lede edit

  • Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
  • Add comma after "Maeda"
    • I'm not so sure. Commas should be used to separate potential sentences and natural pauses. If it was "It was written by Steven Maeda and it was directed by Kim Manners", a comma would be needed, but right now, I don't think its warranted.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • "unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
  • "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8 and was viewed by 5.1 million households" should be "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, being watched by 5.1 million households in its initial broadcast"
  • "It received mostly positive reviews from television critics." should be "It has generally received positive reviews from television critics."
  • ""Audrey Pauley" guest starred Tracey Ellis as the titular Audrey Pauley". Too many "Audrey Pauley's", consider re-write that

Plot edit

  • Add actor for Steven Murdoch
  • Steven Murdoch → Stephen Murdoch
  • Add actor for Mr. Barreiro
  • "some sort of Hell". Hell shouldn't be in capitals
  • "some sort of Hell". isn't encyclopedic. Re-write
    • Why isn't it encyclopedic? They believe they are trapped in a form of hell, as in some for of eternal punishment.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • Add actor for various more

Production edit

Broadcast and reception edit

  • "Audrey Pauley" originally aired on the Fox network in the United States on March 17, 2002 and in the United Kingdom on BBC One on January 26, 2003.[3] During its initial broadcast, the entry was viewed by 5.1 million households[nb 1] and ranked as the 68th most watched episode of television that aired during the week ending March 17.[8] It received a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, meaning that it was seen by 4.8% of the nation's estimated households" re-write to: ""Audrey Pauley" originally aired on the Fox network on March 17, 2002, and was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC One on January 26, 2003.[3] The episode's initial broadcast was viewed by approximately 5.1 million households[nb 1], making it the the sixty-eighth most watched episode of television that aired during the week ending on March 17.[8] "Audrey Pauley" earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, meaning that roughly 4.8 percent of all television-equipped households, were tuned in to the episode.
  • Anyway you can add Nielsen share
  • "The episode received mostly positive reviews from television critics" should be "The episode has generally received positive reviews from television critics."

Notes edit

  • Nothing

References edit

  • Ref. 7: Unlink The X-Files: The Complete Ninth Season, and 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment as it is already linked above

External links edit

  • Nothing

On hold. Great work! TBrandley 07:13, 22 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

I believe I've got them all.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
Yep, I'll pass. Congrats! TBrandley 17:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)Reply