Talk:Alexander Edler/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mo Rock...Monstrous (talk) 23:33, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

This is a very good article, but there are some big problems with the references.

• # 3 and # 33 redirect to the Canucks' Home page
• # 5 and #7 are dead.
• # 10 and # 11 redirect to the WHL home page
• # 18 looks like the same as # 21 but #18 redirects to the Canuck Home page.

as for the proses I didn't see too much wrong just a couple of things:

• "However, an hip injury saw him assigned to the Manitoba Moose." it should be "a" hip injury.
• "He also known for his poise and confidence with the puck, allowing him to make strong first passes out of the defensive zone to forwards." it should read He "is" also known...

These and the links are taken care of I'll pass this. As a suggestion you might want to look into archiving some of your links. Web Cite is a free and easy site to use. The Citation Template allows for a archiveurl= spot provided you add a archivedate=. I'm only mentioning it because you do a lot of work and it seems like you often have to go back and fix dead links. I can suck to Archive a lot of references but I think it pays off in the end.

I'll put this on hold till the above is taken care off. Cheers--Mo Rock...Monstrous (talk) 23:33, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

Thanks very much for the review. I addressed all the above issues with the exception of the WHL link. When that ref is replaced, I'll leave a message on your talk page. Cheers. Orlandkurtenbach (talk) 03:23, 25 September 2010 (UTC)

Links have been fixed so all of my concerns are taken care of. Good work.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (talk) 23:39, 27 September 2010 (UTC)