Talk:1997 Women's Cricket World Cup final/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Kosack in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 09:12, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
I'll take this one on, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 09:12, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
Lead edit
- Might be worth linking wickets here for the uninitiated.
- Links for the Indian and English teams in the second paragraph?
Background edit
- You use both eleven and 12 in successive sections here.
- Worth mentioning that England were the reigning holders?
Australia edit
- Would the Ireland match have been counted in the final table standings? If so, would be worth explaining how they awarded points for it.
- Worth linking wickets and One Day International again here.
- "Australia scored 123 for seven led scores of 33 and 31", led by?
New Zealand edit
- "uneven number of teams, only featured four other teams", a little repetitive with the double use of teams perhaps.
- Worth linking umpires perhaps?
Summary edit
- In the lead, you have no link for Calcutta but include one here. I'd either have both linked or neither.
- Emily Drumm is linked here but there is a Drumm mentioned in their route to the final section. I'm assuming it's the same one so the link needs moving up.
- Along similar lines, you drop the first name for Fitzpatrick, but include the first name for Hockley (and Drumm if the above point is agreed) in the same sentence.
- Note b is a little oddly placed as it seems to be describing the scoring method, but at this point it's halfway through the article and there are frequent uses of it prior.
References edit
In all honesty, I could probably pass this now and have no complaints as it's a very well-written piece. A couple of minor suggestions and adjustments above that could be looked at though, so placed on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 08:43, 14 August 2020 (UTC)