Talk:1925–26 Cardiff City F.C. season/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:47, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

Am reviewing for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 14:47, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "The 1925–26 season was the 25th season of competitive football played by Cardiff City F.C. and the team's fifth consecutive season" - repetition of "season"
• "of the Football League." - the wikilink should not include the word "the"
• "Hughie Ferguson, who was signed for a club record £5,000 in November 1925, was the club's top goalscorer." - repetition of "club"
• Wikilink cap to Cap (sport)

First Division

• Wikilink penalty area and penalty kick
• "inflicting their opponents first defeat of the season" - opponents'
• "However, the team soon entered a dismal run of form," - the text in bold is informal
• "before suffering defeat by the same scoreline against league leaders Sunderland." - being defeated
• "but Birmingham recovered to take the victory." - what was the score?
• "Stewart continued making changes and the club accepted an offer of £3,200 for Gill from Blackpool, the striker leaving after five years at the club." - repetition of "club"
• "All three new signings started the club's next match against Leicester City and the trio combined to earn the club's first points at home for a month." - same issue as above
• "helping his side to a 4–2 win over Notts County, Keenor adding his side's fourth." - repetition of "side"

Match table

• This table requires the addition of scope="col"s to the columns for MOS:DTT compliance

FA Cup

• "The side entered in the third round against fellow First Division side Burnley." - more repetition of the word "side"
• The table in this section and the Welsh Cup section will need scope="col"s added to the columns to comply with MOS:DTT

Player details

• Wikilink cap to Cap (sport)
• The player statstics table will require scope="col"s for the columns to comply with MOS:DTT

Aftermath

• "the club's first ever signing upon his arrival in 1910, left the club after 16 years." - repetition of "club"
• "caused him to lose 22lbs in weight." - please use the convert template on the text indicated in bold

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thanks for the review, I've amended all of the points above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 18:01, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

• @Kosack: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:49, 10 October 2020 (UTC)