Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/June 18, 2007
I propose the following changes to tomorrow's Featured Article blurb:
- Wikilink "Ortoiroid" to the article on the Orinoco river. It's an unfamiliar term and I can't find an article on the Orinoco people or culture to link it to directly.
- "...history began with the settlement... by the Ortoiroid culture..." Better to say "settlement... by the Ortoiroid people...".
- In the proper noun phrase "Spanish-American war", "war" should be capitalized. Also wikilink "Spanish-American War".
I propose the following slightly altered new version:
The history of Puerto Rico began with the settlement of the archipelago of Puerto Rico by the Ortoiroid people, sometime between 3000–2000 BC. At the time of Christopher Columbus's arrival in the New World, the dominant indigenous culture was that of the Taínos. The Taíno culture died out during the latter half of the 16th century because of exploitation, war and diseases brought by the Spanish. Puerto Rico was the key to the Spanish Empire since the early years of the exploration, conquest and colonization of the New World. The smallest of the Greater Antilles, Puerto Rico was a major military post during many wars between Spain and other European powers for control of the region during the 16th, 17th and 18th centuries. In 1898, during the Spanish-American War, Puerto Rico was invaded and subsequently became a possession of the United States. The first part of the 20th century was marked by the struggle to obtain greater democratic rights from the United States. The Foraker Act of 1900, which established a civil government, and the Jones Act of 1917, which granted Puerto Ricans U.S. citizenship, paved the way for the drafting of Puerto Rico's Constitution and the establishment of democratic elections in 1952. However, the political status of Puerto Rico, a Commonwealth controlled by the U.S., remains an anomaly, more than 500 years after the first Europeans settled the island. (more...)
Cheers, ➪HiDrNick! 01:33, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
- The latter two proposed changes have been made, and I have now added the link to Ortoiroid people. Nishkid64 (talk) 23:32, 18 June 2007 (UTC)