Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/July 23, 2006
Latest comment: 17 years ago by Rjm656s in topic Phrasing
Pat Buchanan's surprising challenge edit
It wasn't surprising that Pat Buchanan challenged Bush in the primaries, but it was surprising that his challenge did so well. Perhaps the summary should make that clear. David | Talk 23:28, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
Phrasing edit
The prase "Democrat-conrolled congress" seem like poor writing to me. Is there any way it can be rephrased? Rjm656s 22:18, 23 July 2006 (UTC)