Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/February 7, 2022

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Thank you, and agree with most changes. Not yet happy with a few things:

  • We lost that the hymn (first person, emotional) and the scripture (doctrinal) contrast, and complement each other. I trust that you can say that better than I could.
  • The "It" in the last sentence is ambiguous, having spoken about a theory and a funeral which also could be "it" ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:36, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

dying, there was also a later version on my talk, perhaps consult that also. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:20, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

wish now that it's protected

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