Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/The Battle of Alexander at Issus/archive1

Comment. Alt text done; thanks. Alt text is mostly present (thanks) but has a few problems:

• File:Albrecht Altdorfer 037.jpg lacks alt text.
• The alt text for File:BattleofIssus333BC-mosaic-detail1.jpg doesn't do justice to that image. I'd mention the Medusa breastplate, the wavy dark hair, and the determined look.
• The alt text "A military diagram" is too terse; it should briefly say what the map says, excluding info in the caption, to avoid repetition. Topics might include the location of Parmanian, Orientals, Greeks, and Darius. Please see WP:ALT#Maps for a guideline.
• The alt text for File:BattleofIssusDetail11.jpg should briefly mention the most striking part of that image, namely the fluttering reddish drapery. Or perhaps the drapery should be cropped out, if it's not relevant?

Eubulides (talk) 01:42, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

• • I've done all but the last. I considered cropping out the drapery, but I felt the image would turn out too small. As an incidental feature, I don't think it's worth mentioning in the alt text. —Anonymous Dissident^Talk 08:38, 27 November 2009 (UTC)
    • Fair enough. Thanks for finishing the alt text. Eubulides (talk) 08:59, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Fifelfoo (talk)'s resolved 2c moved at 10:23, 30 November 2009 (UTC)

2c:

Kingfisher article not named when cited.

No longer applicable. —Anonymous Dissident^Talk 10:55, 20 November 2009 (UTC)

Multiple authors not correctly cited in short citations.

Please name them. —Anonymous Dissident^Talk 10:55, 20 November 2009 (UTC)

For example, "Sacks, David; Murray, Oswyn; Bunson, Margaret (1997)." is cited as "Sacks, p. 14" when it should be cited as "Sacks; Murray; Bunston, p. 14", this is true of other multiple author works in your short cites (Corvisier, André; Childs, John (1994). Hagen, Rose-Marie; Hagen, Rainer (2003). Hanawalt, Barbara; Kobialka, Michal (2000). Heckel, Waldemar; Yardley, John (2004). Janson, Horst W.; Janson, Anthony F. Romm, James S.; Mensch, Pamela (2005). ) Fifelfoo (talk) 11:05, 20 November 2009 (UTC)

All done. —Anonymous Dissident^Talk 12:45, 20 November 2009 (UTC)