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Super Columbine Massacre RPG! edit

One of the most controversial video games in recent times; I'm interesting in organization, copyediting, and any comments you have (accessibility?) --Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (talk) 17:12, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments Overall, this is an excellent article, that I believe, handles a controversial title with a very even-handed, NPOV approach. I only found a few things that bothered me:

  • There are inconsistencies or errors with the use of italics (or not) in the article:
    1. Should RPG Maker 2000 be in italics or not? Even its own article is undecided.
    2. Films should always be in italics and not in quotes, as is currently the case for The God Who Wasn't There.
    3. Film festivals are not, to the best of my knowledge, normally in italics, as is currently the case for the AFI Fest.
  • There are inconsistencies in the spelling of the name of Ryan Lambourn/Lambourne. It appears under each spelling several times within a single paragraph.

All in all, very minor issues that I found. — Bellhalla (talk) 20:00, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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