Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Star Fox Adventures

Star Fox Adventures edit

Just finished with some major edits to the page, although I still have a few minor things to do (couple more refs, slight expansion to the "reception" section). Was wondering if it can be improved any. Thunderbrand 03:19, 17 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Oooo, shiny. Pretty good. The only problem that sticks out is the paragraph regarding the "rumors the dev team requested to go along with the original design", which is completely uncited (and you cited everything so well). Other than that, a good copyedit should get the page close to FA. Nifboy 05:29, 17 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, when I was reading that I thought of just removing it, but I vaguely remember reading about that from Rare, so I will try and look for it. Thunderbrand 14:40, 17 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]