Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Rufus (Street Fighter)

Rufus (Street Fighter) edit

This article is on Rufus, a character introduced in Street Fighter IV. Requesting a peer review of it to take care of any and all remaining issues, because I plan to give it a go with FAC after expanding the lead and taking care of any remaining issues. Please be brutal with it because I've been fiddling with it all day and fixed whatever I could find.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

First off, the picture in the Character Design section should maybe be smaller because its too disracting (but that's my opinion). And in the line,

"Later appearing in the second issue of UDON's Street Fighter IV comic book, Rufus attempts to find him through his friend Sakura Kasugano, defeating Dan Hibiki in the process but is himself defeated afterwards." Who defeats Rufus?

I wasn't sure about that: C. Viper comes out of nowhere and does that because she's after Sakura, but mentioning that means another namedrop for something not that related to the character...--Kung Fu Man (talk) 15:15, 10 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

For the lead, maybe add a middle paragraph to explain why Rufus entered the fighting tournament. GamerPro64 (talk) 04:56, 12 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]