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My reason for requesting a peer review is so that I can attempt to achieve a good topic on Key's visual novels, of which include this article and six others (in Category:Key games) which are all GA, including the company article. It seems it is needed to have an "individual quality audit that includes a completed peer review, with all important problems fixed" for any article not up to GA/FA/FL status. Thanks.--十八 04:49, 12 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "Rewrite (リライト, Riraito?) is a Japanese visual novel being developed by Key playable on the PC as a DVD." Add that is after PC.
  • Specify what Key is.
  • "However, Na-Ga does provide his assistance assists with computer graphics"
  • "and Romeo Tanaka, notable" use known instead of "notable"
  • Current refs 6 and 7 deadlink.

Dabomb87 (talk) 03:13, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done, and thanks.--十八 04:49, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Good luck at GTC! Dabomb87 (talk) 12:44, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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