Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Pilotwings 64

Pilotwings 64 edit

I've significantly expanded the article in the past few months using numerous print and online sources. I'd like some feedback on how it can be improved further. ~ Hibana (talk) 15:25, 25 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I dont think the picture of MT. Mario nessessary. It should probably be removed. GamerPro64 (talk) 20:51, 25 January 2010 (UTC)

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Crimsonfox's Comments

The article looks fairly good but the gameplay section seems to have a lot of short sentences which means it does flow to well Y
I would move the third paragraph in the reception section to the top. It makes sense to have information about the release first, then move onto reception after release. Y

Sorry it isn't much, but I hope it helps. CrimsonFox ^talk 21:09, 27 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]