Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/MotorStorm
MotorStorm edit
I am very interested in the topic and want to improve it to (eventually) FA status. Mawfive 04:37, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
- The article needs quite a bit of work. The lead is very small, non-free images lack fair use rationale, references are improperly formatted (try {{cite web}} and fill out the parameters), the Reviews section is a list of reviews with no prose, sectioning needs work ("Release" contains some material that belong in "Reviews", the rest of "Release" and "E3 Video Footage" should be in the same section), many portions needs references. The basic structure of most video game articles is (lead)/Plot/Gameplay/Development/Reception. Read the article and imagine placing the text you're reading into one of these sections, then restructure. Feel free to expand on it if the article warrants it. Pagrashtak 05:51, 8 May 2007 (UTC)