Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Hydro Thunder Hurricane

Hydro Thunder Hurricane edit

With the recent release of the DLC pack, I feel like I can finally prep this for GAN. I've done several copy edits over the article, but no matter what when you're really the only one working on it you can't catch everything. I'd really like to get another few sets of eyes on the article to see what I missed, if there are errors in flow, etc. I've already done a dead link/disambig check and covered those. Thanks much! --Teancum (talk) 17:48, 28 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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In the lead, there should be mention that Hydro Thunder Hurricane is part of the Thunder series.

Done Y

In the gameplay screenshot, the wiki-link should probably be removed since its linked to a Category.

Done Y

Is XBLAfans a reliable source?

It's currently under consideration at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Video games/Sources

The Youtube link should be removed as its just a trailer for the game.

Done Y

GamerPro64 (talk) 20:03, 1 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've fixed the three small issues and replied on XBLAfans. --Teancum (talk) 20:50, 1 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]