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This is a log of A-Class reviews from WikiProject Grey's Anatomy.

Approved nominations edit

The following is an archived discussion of an A-Class nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in the main page's talk page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was approved by TBrandley 05:06, 1 November 2012 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Going, Going, Gone (Grey's Anatomy) edit

Nominator(s): TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 14:33, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for A-Class because while I understand some may feel it is too early for FA status, I believe this fully satisfies the criteria for A-Class. Thanks, TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 14:33, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support It is a great article - well written, containing all the available relevant info, with free images. Its quality has already been established after the Good Article Review. And while I myself believe it is too early for Featured Article Candidacy, it fully satisfies the criteria for A-Class. Jonathan Harol*d Koszeghi (talk) 11:48, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support I agree with Jonathan; it's a good article with no apparent issues. --Sofffie7 (talk) 12:43, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from TBrandley (talk) 04:49, 1 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "season eight finale" should be two separate links, one for season eight, one for the finale
  • "Further storylines include" I don't think that is necessary, I'd remove and say "Dr. Cristina Yang (Sandra Oh) also relocates to a different hospital, while a group of new interns are being intimidated by Dr. Meredith Grey (Ellen Pompeo).", or something like that
  • "The episode saw the death of Dr. Mark Sloan (Eric Dane); Dane" to "The episode saw the death of Dr. Mark Sloan (Eric Dane); the actor", as I'm not keen on two Dane's right by each other
  • "as disconsolate" shouldn't there be an "an" in the middle of that?
  • In plot, ""Going, Going, Gone"", and in the next sentence it opens with "The episode", since the last sentence says that, could you change "The episode" to "It" for this one
    • They're two different openings, to allow functional clarity. "It" raises confusion. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 14:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why is "interns" linking in plot, and not in the lede
  • "attending general surgeon" attending shouldn't be linked there
  • Due to one of the last couple issues, can now this sentence "It is revealed" be changed to "The episode reveals"
  • "something that was initially" for Wikipedia, I wouldn't use "something", perhaps change to "a program that was initially", or instead of "a program" you could use "which", just thinking here
    • 'Something' is perfectly normal and acceptable encyclopedic usage. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 14:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • I suggest tightening with deleting the "though", and then replacing comma with a semicolon.
    • Improper usage of the semi-colon – the sentence only has 3 clauses. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 14:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "his hand becomes numb" who's this, just to clarify?
    • It's obviously Derek's – writing "During Shepherd's surgery, Shepherd's hand..." would sound redundant. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 14:03, 29 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link Minnesota per WP:MOS
  • Los Angeles is overlinked in production, its first link is in the first paragraph, and the second in the third paragraph, unlink the one is in the third paragraph, per WP:OVERLINK
  • In reception, "The rating was a 7 percent increase from the previous season premiere, which received a 4.1/10 Nielsen rating/share in the 18–49 demographic. The rating" the rating one sentence after another with it doesn't seem right, perhaps change second one
  • "deemed the flashbacks featuring Sloan" to "deemed the flashbacks that featured Sloan"

TBrandley 16:06, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a look at these issues by the end of the week; currently too busy. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 01:45, 25 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.

Failed nominations edit

The following is an archived discussion of an A-Class nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in the main page's talk page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not approved by TRLIJC19 13:11, 1 November 2012 (UTC) [2].[reply]

A Change Is Gonna Come (Grey's Anatomy) edit

Nominator(s): Jonathan Harold Koszeghi (talk) 11:38, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for A-Class because I believe that it fully satisfies the criteria for A-Class. Thanks, Jonathan Harold Koszeghi (talk) 11:38, 18 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Lead: I suggest you move the sentence about the Washington's non-appearance next to the guest stars at the beginning as it lists the actors that appeared in the episode so the line on Washington would better fit there, IMO. I know it changes the lines' adjustements but I feel it would be more logical. If you do make the change then you'll have to link Washington there and unlink him under.

* Plot question: You say Mark seeks reconciliation with Derek. Did he succeed? Did they reconcile? If not then maybe it could be briefly mentioned ;)

  • Reception: Capitalize the 'S' of BuzzSugar
  • Issues in the references:
    • Ref. 1: Replace ABC with American Broadcasting Company and link it since it's mentioned for the first time. Oh and why is the title of the episode bolded? (just askin')
    • Ref. 5: Link People and add the publisher, which is Time Inc
    • Ref. 6: Publisher=Time Inc
    • Ref. 8: Jezebel.com -> Jezebel; add the publisher (Gawker Media) and link it
    • Ref. 9: the work is E! Online, the publisher is NBCUniversal
    • Ref. 11: Lowercase the 'P' of Starpulse
    • Ref. 12: The Washington Post is the work (don't forget the 'The'); add the publisher (The Washington Post Company) and link it
    • Ref. 15: unlink Time Inc
    • Ref. 18: link TNYT and TNYTC
    • Ref. 19: ABC.com -> American Broadcasting Company
    • Ref. 23: ABC.com -> American Broadcasting Company
    • Ref. 24: Just keep BuddyTV as publisher (to have it also in 'work' is redundant) and link it
    • Ref. 25: Link Entertainment Weekly; add the publisher (Time Inc), the author and the date
    • Ref. 26: Keep TVGuide as 'work' only and link it
    • Ref. 28: Capitalize the 'S' of BuzzSugar; publisher=Sugar, Inc
    • Ref. 29: Link IGN and News Corporation

--Sofffie7 (talk) 12:34, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Coordinator note – This article will need spotchecks to check for plagiarism and verifiability, because Jonathan has never had them done for one of his articles. TRLIJC19 (talk • contribs) 00:44, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • I'll try to give this a spotcheck later, unless someone beats me to it. TBrandley 03:35, 23 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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