Wikipedia:WikiProject Novels/Peer review/Master of the Game
I've done a considerable amount of work on this article, and felt that it was ready for a review. I am sure that after a few more weeks, it'll be ready for a GA or an FA. --Kzrulzuall Talk• Contribs 23:47, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
Some basic suggestions
editFirst I would say this is an article that is showing a lot of improvements, so good work here. For further work I would suggest looking at our article template and then having a go at the following.
- Adding anything you can find more to demonstate notability
- Put in a section on any form of critical comment, reviews etc.
- separate out the "historical" and "cultural" references.
- the image used should ideally be of "slightly" better quality and also ideally a "first edition" I know of no reason why a later edition would be more notable, unless you do.
- remove the blurb (likely copyright voilation).
- add a "Plot introduction" which introduce the basics of the Plot but without any spoiler material.
How about those for a start. :: Kevinalewis : (Talk Page)/(Desk) 07:56, 14 May 2007 (UTC)
- I've changed the image to a first edition one, removed the blurb, deleted the cultural reference as there is hardly any, and added a short plot introduction into the lead. As for the critical reviews, I am pretty sure that NYT has some, as it is a reasonably well known book... --Kzrulzuall Talk• Contribs 09:51, 22 May 2007 (UTC)